Date: 2009-03-31 06:29 am (UTC)
It was a humorous read but I did see two misspellings.

- A gust of WIND came over and hit the side of the boat, sending Andromeda into the water with a splash.

“RHEA!”

The girls in the summer house were giggling now, Setsuna rolling her eyes. Before anyone could say anything, Venus had leapt into the water as well, grabbing Serenity's wrist and dragging her in to.

“Serenity! Venus!” Setsuna sighed and threw her hands up. “Oh, I give up. You're a terrible influence, Rhea.”

“I know. Isn't it awesome?” Rhea and Andromeda were treading water, whilst Serenity and Venus were splashing each other.

It didn't take long for Jupiter and Mercury to join Serenity and Venus; even Mars jumped in, even after she tried to say and study, to do what she was expected to.

“Come on, Setsuna! Join the fun!” Rhea dunked Jupiter.

“I'm FINE out here,” Setsuna called back.

“Fine, stay on the sidelines,” Rhea disappeared under the water, and didn't hear Setsuna's response.

“It's what I do."

- CRCAWF
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