"and the staff that she could whip around like some crazy staff-whipping person."
I LOVE that line, he was just so dazed and confused, but you reign him in really well at the end, he's not a complete idiot and you definitely bring out his serious side in the end. Nicely done!
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Date: 2009-01-08 03:39 am (UTC)I LOVE that line, he was just so dazed and confused, but you reign him in really well at the end, he's not a complete idiot and you definitely bring out his serious side in the end. Nicely done!