http://charliechaplin2.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] charliechaplin2.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lexiewrites 2009-01-08 03:39 am (UTC)

"and the staff that she could whip around like some crazy staff-whipping person."

I LOVE that line, he was just so dazed and confused, but you reign him in really well at the end, he's not a complete idiot and you definitely bring out his serious side in the end. Nicely done!
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